Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Fic Index: Jack Series (complete)


Summary: Rich, infamous, hedonistic and dominant, Tiran Marx openly maintains a harem of submissives. By turns benevolent and ruthless, Tiran doesn’t have the patience to keep a tight rein on his subs. So he hires his friend, the proud, brittle, sometimes brutal disciplinarian, Jack Obernikoch, who takes charge with extreme prejudice. Set one or two generations the future, in a world where social norms have evolved slightly but human emotions are as confused as ever.

Content notes: NC-17. Dominance/submission. Violence, explicit and implied. Sex, usually implied. Humiliation, multiple partners.

Beta: Brknhalo241 (Part 3, Epilogue)

Comprised of:
- Part 1: Jack Arrives
- Part 2: Jack Acclimatizes
- Part 3: Jack Accepts
- Epilogue: Adjustments


*****


Part 1: Jack Arrives. The first three days.
Arrives, vi: to reach a place after coming from another place

Chapter 1: Arrival
(5,650 words, 3rd person, Jack's POV)

Chapter 2: First Meeting (Part 1)
(2,380 words, 1st person, Jack's POV)

Chapter 3: First Meeting (Part 2)
(3,140 words, 1st person, Jack's POV)

[The remaining chapters in Part 1 are generally optional, and can be skimmed or skipped. Plot resumes in Part 2.]

Chapter 4: Aftermath I: Tiran & Rocky
(3,330 words, 3rd person)

Chapter 5: Aftermath II: Debrief
(1,970 words, 3rd person)

Chapter 6: Aftermath III: Jack & Rocky
(1,690 words, 3rd person, Jack's POV)

Chapter 7: Aftermath IV: Tiran & Gabe
(2,210 words, 1st person, Tiran's POV)

Chapter 8: Prequel: The Proposal
(3,150 words, 3rd person)

*****


Part 2: Jack Acclimatizes. The next nine months.
Acclimatizes, vi: to become accustomed to a new climate or environment

Chapter 1: A Public Scene
(2,850 words, 1st person, Jack’s POV)
- Jack considers the best form of discipline for Rocky

Chapter 2: An Inventory
(2,850 words, 1st person, Jack’s POV)
- Jack takes stock of his other charges (Optional chapter)

Chapter 3: A Question of Protocol
(5,350 words, 1st person, Jack’s POV)
- Jack watches Tiran in action, and discusses the correct form of address

Chapter 4: A Fight, in Three Movements
(7,150 words, 3rd person, Rocky’s POV)
- Tiran and Rocky fight, and Jack’s not very happy either

Chapter 5: A Puzzle
(4,880 words, 1st person, Jack’s POV)
- Jack thinks back, and moves forward

Chapter 6: A Discussion, and a Discovery
(3,960 words, 1st person, Jack’s POV)
- Jack talks politics with Paul, and makes an interesting discovery

Chapter 7: A Choice
(4,360 words, 1st person, Jack’s POV, warning: violence)
- Jack responds to his discovery, and makes a choice

*****


Part 3: Jack Accepts. To the end of the second year.
Accepts, vi/vt:
1. to acknowledge that something is true
2. to acknowledge a fact or truth and come to terms with it
3. to take something that is offered

Chapter 1: Working for Tiran
(2,720 words, 1st person, Jack’s POV)
- Jack learns new things about his job

Chapter 2: Work/Life
(5,650 words, 1st person, Jack’s POV)
- Jack's work is never done

Chapter 3: Just Like Rocky
(4,090 words, 1st person, Jack's POV)
- Jack looks at things in a different way

Chapter 4: Meeting
(3,615 words, 1st person, Jack's POV)
- Jack says good-bye to the boys

Chapter 5: Turn-About
(3,500 words, 1st person, Jack's POV)
- Turn-about is fair play, but Jack's not happy about it

Chapter 6: Weekend
(2,850 words, 3rd person)
- Tiran's in a good mood

Chapter 7: Lions
(1,900 words, 1st person, Jack's POV)
- a lttle dinner conversation

Chapter 8: Presumption
(3,600 words, 1st person, Jack's POV)
- a night out goes wrong

Chapter 9: Ships
(3,730 words, 1st person, Jack's POV)
- consequences

Chapter 10: Strength
(2,900 words, 1st person, Jack's POV)
- a new normal

Chapter 11: Service
(5,430 words, 1st person, Jack's POV)
- Tiran makes a discovery

Chapter 12: Hard Won
(5,890 words, 1st person, Jack's POV)
- to the victor go the spoils

*****


Epilogue: Adjustments. A study of shared life.
The honeymoon period, inspired by Middlemarch.

Detailed author's note

Chapter 1
(2,630 words, 3rd person)
- picking up where we left off

Chapter 2
(2,230 words, 3rd person)
- the boys get back into routines

Chapter 3A
(2,460 words, 3rd person, present tense)
- Rocky meets some of Jack's friends

Chapter 3B
(2,200 words, 3rd person, present tense)
- inside the back room

Chapter 4
(2,440 words, 3rd person)
- the morning after the night before

Chapter 5
(1,930 words, 3rd person)
- first fight

Chapter 6
(3,140 words, 3rd person)
- Jack and Tiran share

Chapter 7
(2,900 words, 3rd person)
- Jack plans a trip back home

Chapter 8
(2,360 words, 3rd person, Rocky's POV)
- Rocky takes a chance

Chapter 9
(2,580 words, 3rd person)
- teamwork

Chapter 10
(2,490 words, 3rd person, Rocky's POV)
- Jack's session

Chapter 11
(2,990 words, 3rd person)
- advice

Chapter 12
(3,440 words, 3rd person)
- adjustments








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